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| bubblepopelectric |
 Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2005 9:10 pm |
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here's another song i wrote...and again i'm not sure if it's fully done.....i just had to get my thoughts down!
Unorganized
Unorganization
Is my…kind…of
Organization
Don’t ask me why
I don’t know why
Unoganization
Helps me…in…a
Weird situation
Don’t ask me why
I don’t know why
Things over here
Things over there
Where oh where
has my sanity gone?
Backpack is a mess
But I’m not distressed
Cause unorganiztion
Is the friggin’ best!
Unorganization
Is my…kind…of
Organization
Don’t ask me why
I don’t know why
Unoganization
Helps me…in…a
Weird situation
Don’t ask me why
I don’t know why
File folders
Flowing over
Missing things
Under the covers
Things I’ve needed
But never succeeded in finding
Help to show me of things that
Should be weeded from my life
Unorganization
Is my…kind…of
Organization
Please ask me why
I do know why
Unoganization
Helps me…in…a
Weird situation
Please ask me why
I do know why
If things have been sitting without usage
What is the point of theme existing
They’re sewage!
That’s what I’ve learned
From unorganiztion
So all of that sewage is burned |
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| gene |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 12:16 am |
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I have found often that creative and talented artists have creative and talented fans...this board is no exception!
love all the work...keep posting!
your friend
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| shh |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 1:26 am |
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| TiFF |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 1:46 am |
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here's a poem written a long time ago..
popcicle
can't remember when days of summer
tasted so sweet,
like running through the sprinklers
with all my clothes on.
laughing so hard lungs hurt
but didn't care.
staying up late watching movies
in teddy bear pajamas -
kinda like tearing away that cold wrapper
of an orange popcicle
after chasing the ice cream truck
with quarters clenched in hand.
dripping ice cream from the hot summer sun
all over my clothes
of grass stain knees and tire-swing trees.
and as the last bite fades into the
warm tongues of children like
the sun into the summer sky -
never tasted so sweet. |
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| DoOdLe |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 2:20 am |
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| I love that, Tiff. That really transports you to the good ol' days! *tear* |
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| tanejsnik |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 2:31 am |
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verrrrrry nice poem, tiff. love it.
alright well..... here is a rather ridiculous poem..... ehhh.... i'll post it anyway....
(ahem...) mustard is bad
mustard, oh mustard
how i loathe thee
to my tongue
you are pure misery
you are tangy...
yet sour.
you're surely not sweet.
you contaminate my sandwhich
you regurgitate my meat.
overcome with miserable sickness
my countenance cringes
with your yucky, yellow thickness
oh why do so many chose you, mustard,
as condiment number one?
mustard, to me,
you're the antonym of fun.
you make me gag
in a most vicious way
so, just pour on the ketchup
is all i have to say!
surely nothing spectacular but i enjoy writing them  |
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| bubblepopelectric |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 3:16 am |
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oh i love love love that poem tan......lol.....it's really fun.....
awesome job tiff on your poem.....it brings back great memories... |
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| TiFF |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 5:15 am |
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OMG tan! hahahahaha i LOVED it! hehehehehe
it's extra hilarious because we had a mustard conversation this morning at school when one of my friends was talking about how she hated mustard, and how we concured, but i LOVE honey mustard. weird. |
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| Narc |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 7:36 pm |
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Nice writings everyone!!! Yeah, keep posting!  |
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| shh |
| Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 7:53 pm |
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really nice  |
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| DoOdLe |
| Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 3:02 am |
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I found an old poem I did...but I think I'd be too embarrassed to post it. Especially after seeing these awesome ones!  I'll stick to visual arts. 
Here's my fave pic I took for my first photography assignment. It's at my barn. And it's my kitty, Puss with a bunch of the other evil unnamed ones in the window in the background.
Here's another O.K. one of Puss on the window:
They aren't amazing or anything..I was just learning how to use the camera in manual mode. Puss is very photogenic though! |
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| TiFF |
| Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 3:11 am |
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o0o0o love the pix doods!!
i wish i could show the stuff i do for class on here. but i don't think it would look good if i took pix of it. |
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| tanejsnik |
| Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 5:33 am |
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Quote: tiff: OMG tan! hahahahaha i LOVED it! hehehehehe
it's extra hilarious because we had a mustard conversation this morning at school when one of my friends was talking about how she hated mustard, and how we concured, but i LOVE honey mustard. weird.
hehe. well, i try strange... it seems that whenever mustard comes up in conversation (which is quite rare....) i am over ruled and everyone agrees that is incredibly delicious. bbblllllaaahhhh. ::gag::
really nice pics, doodle! i love kitties. so cute. haha. i'm not really sure how to go about describing them in terms of photography (cuz im not into it... wish i could be).... but they are great! go ahead, doodle... post some poetry! im sure its fine |
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| DoOdLe |
| Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2005 9:52 pm |
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| Thanks, Tane...I try....hopefully I'll get better with the camera as the semester goes on! Hmm...we'll see about the poetry. It's very bush. |
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| bubblepopelectric |
| Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 12:23 am |
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| oooooo i love the kitty pictures!......they are adorable! |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 4:08 am |
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nice stuff everyone! here are the lyrics to one of my songs. it's called "little words"
I feel your heartbeat through the mattress
But we know that you won't stay
And it suits you like those jeans do
In every single way
You sigh the perfect sigh for me
Each time we say goodnight
And I know that I feel something
But something does not feel right
Our mysteries hate to be solved
Our history will never evolve
Our whispers never make a sound
As these little words just seem to pass around
We smile as we pretend to be just friends
But we know that they're not blind
Sometimes I think that they know more than we do
Because we can't read between when there's no lines
Feel the time has come to walk away
But I can't do that just yet
Because as hard as it seems to be with you
The easier it really gets
Our mysteries hate to be solved
Our history will never evolve
Our whispers never make a sound
As these little words just seem to pass around
Take it back
What you didn't say
And I'll take it back
What I didn't say
Our mysteries hate to be solved
Our history will never evolve
Our whispers never make a sound
As these little words just seem to pass around |
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We both know that I'm not just moving on.
It's so hard to leave, so hard to hurt,
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| bubblepopelectric |
| Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 4:22 am |
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| that's awesome! good job! |
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| Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 5:32 am |
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| thanks bubble! i like "unorganized". do you have any more? |
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because we don't want it to be true.
We both know that I'm not just moving on.
It's so hard to leave, so hard to hurt,
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| bubblepopelectric |
| Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 7:27 am |
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thanks....
yeah i have more....but they are works in progress...
the closest one to being finished is called "part of the show"....but that is just a tentative title...i might change it or keep it......
i'll post more as soon as they're done!..... |
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| Stella* |
| Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2005 10:16 pm |
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Wow , brilliant stuff guys ! Aren't we all a talented bunch eh?!!
It's very special. I love it!
Doods your kitten is majorly sweeeet . Aw.
Hey I wonder if Cole will post some stuff....Cole??? Oh and where's Zwerg , Ice and Frosti these days ?? Come back guys - we love ya ! |
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| bubblepopelectric |
| Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 3:23 am |
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| yeah they seemed to disapear! |
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| DoOdLe |
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| I LOVE that poem, GoToHere! Good stuff. We ARE a talented bunch! |
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| Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 9:00 pm |
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wrote this a looooooooooooooooong time ago, but still one of my faves:
Your Stories
You said it with your soothing voice…
As you tilted your head back and
A smile stretched across your face, that
Grin that always makes me feel happy and carefree like
The flowers and the wind and the sunshine as they all dance
Together in harmony.
You said it calmly…
Like the gentle whispers of
The stars in the night sky asking me to
Come and dance in its midnight splendors as the
Rest of the world lay in their slumbers and could only
Dream of such things as I was doing as I danced on
Tippy-toes pulling at the moonlight.
I tried not to bite my lip as I listened
To you speak, telling me
Your story of something I don’t remember. Because
All I was doing was watching your lips move and
Wondering what it would be like to touch your hand
And see if your hand would touch mine
In the same loving way I dreamt about in my
Nights with the stars dancing above me like
Angels guarding my dreams not letting anyone or anything
Take away my memories and feelings of you.
Because as you’re speaking, telling me your story of
Something I don’t remember
I always remember how your voice soothes me
And your smile spreads across your lips
And how you speak to me calmly, telling me
Your stories of something I don’t remember. |
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| skaro |
| Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 11:17 pm |
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cool thread guys. vera enjoyable to peruse this.
doods, love the pics, esp what's going on in the
windows in both pics
tanejsnik, can i borrow your image for my poem?
it reminded me of it as soon as i saw it.
burn and winter crush
bare only beauty here
as stark, a skylight rains
so sing
sleep soft their ache away
not leave a spray
no smear
of skin, or whispered spring
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| bubblepopelectric |
| Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 12:31 am |
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| awesome stuff tiff and skaro......i should have another song up here soon! |
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TiFF wrote: hey.. yea.. i was just wondering the other day where zwerg and frosti were.
zwerg said he has been unbelievably busy but that all is good and he has a dvd out...maybe he will post more soon!
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| Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 2:44 am |
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thanks doodle, your pics are great!
and tiff, your poems are soooo relaxing. i love 'em.
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| DoOdLe |
| Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2005 2:53 am |
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| Love that poem, Ska! Lovely. |
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